Gentle Thaw

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1.
West wind caresses
drab landscape promising spring
gentle thaw begins

2.
Kind words caress
a cold hardened heart
gentle thaw begins

 

 

7 thoughts on “Gentle Thaw

  1. jflint82's avatar Jarrod C says:

    It truly is amazing what a few kind words can do.

  2. Fay R Kesby's avatar Fay R Kesby says:

    Short, simple, but brilliant!

  3. Lovely imagery. Kindness is always a wonderful gift.

    Blessings ~ Wendy ❀

  4. Meghan's avatar Meghan says:

    The pricelessness of kindness far outweights ice! Mary, I really like the structure and 2 verse length of your poems here. It shows a lovely movement between the landscape and the relationship within your verses. I think this writing shows a real progression in your style of haiku!

  5. mincs1's avatar mincs1 says:

    Thank-you for your thoughtful comments, Meghan 🙂

  6. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    may we all do a little “thawing” today 🙂
    Love this!
    and thanks for following my blog.
    lillian

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