March 10, 2015 by mincs1 Gentle Thaw 1. West wind caresses drab landscape promising spring gentle thaw begins 2. Kind words caress a cold hardened heart gentle thaw begins Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
It truly is amazing what a few kind words can do.
Short, simple, but brilliant!
I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Lovely imagery. Kindness is always a wonderful gift.
Blessings ~ Wendy ❀
The pricelessness of kindness far outweights ice! Mary, I really like the structure and 2 verse length of your poems here. It shows a lovely movement between the landscape and the relationship within your verses. I think this writing shows a real progression in your style of haiku!
Thank-you for your thoughtful comments, Meghan 🙂
may we all do a little “thawing” today 🙂
and thanks for following my blog.