6 thoughts on “Raspberries”

1. Meghan Jones says:

   January 17, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

   Mary, I really like this one! The sounds, the cadence, all work so well here!

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   • mincs1 says:

     January 18, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

     Thanks, Meghan. Maybe I should have said silent deer noshing instead of noisy deer noshing but I was imagining them smacking their lips in delight over the lush berries 🙂

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     • Meghan says:

       January 21, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

       No, I disagree. I think you were right to say “Noisy deer noshing…” for that is part of the noisiness of their eating and the wonderful cadence of your speech!

     • mincs1 says:

       January 21, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

       Thanks for the feedback!

2. Jarrod C says:

   January 18, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

   I like raspberries a lot!

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   • mincs1 says:

     January 18, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0001

     Raspberries are one of my favorite fruits!!

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