January 17, 2015 by mincs1 Raspberries Plump red raspberries edible sweet juicy fruit noisy deer noshing Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
Mary, I really like this one! The sounds, the cadence, all work so well here!
Thanks, Meghan. Maybe I should have said silent deer noshing instead of noisy deer noshing but I was imagining them smacking their lips in delight over the lush berries 🙂
No, I disagree. I think you were right to say “Noisy deer noshing…” for that is part of the noisiness of their eating and the wonderful cadence of your speech!
Thanks for the feedback!
I like raspberries a lot!
Raspberries are one of my favorite fruits!!