5 thoughts on “Blackbirds”

1. Elizabeth says:

   February 11, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0002

   cute poem and birds!

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   • mincs1 says:

     February 12, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0002

     Thanks!

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2. Meghan says:

   February 14, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0002

   I like this clever little haiku…”Feathers on the air” gives this haiku so many possible meanings. At least to my mind it does. Nice one!

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3. mincs1 says:

   February 14, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0002

   I loved the ambiguity of “feathers on the air” 🙂

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4. Meghan says:

   February 15, 2015 at 2:22 -07:0002

   Exactly!! Ambiguity I think is one of the keys to a good haiku. 🙂

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