February 11, 2015 by mincs1 Blackbirds Curious blackbirds poised upon telephone wire feathers on the air Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
cute poem and birds!
I like this clever little haiku…”Feathers on the air” gives this haiku so many possible meanings. At least to my mind it does. Nice one!
I loved the ambiguity of “feathers on the air” 🙂
Exactly!! Ambiguity I think is one of the keys to a good haiku. 🙂