5 thoughts on “Blackbirds”

  1. Elizabeth says:
    February 11, 2015 at 2:22 p02

    cute poem and birds!

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  2. Meghan says:
    February 14, 2015 at 2:22 p02

    I like this clever little haiku…”Feathers on the air” gives this haiku so many possible meanings. At least to my mind it does. Nice one!

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  3. mincs1 says:
    February 14, 2015 at 2:22 p02

    I loved the ambiguity of “feathers on the air” 🙂

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  4. Meghan says:
    February 15, 2015 at 2:22 p02

    Exactly!! Ambiguity I think is one of the keys to a good haiku. 🙂

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