5 thoughts on “Blackbirds

  1. Elizabeth says:

    cute poem and birds!

  2. Meghan says:

    I like this clever little haiku…”Feathers on the air” gives this haiku so many possible meanings. At least to my mind it does. Nice one!

  3. mincs1 says:

    I loved the ambiguity of “feathers on the air” 🙂

  4. Meghan says:

    Exactly!! Ambiguity I think is one of the keys to a good haiku. 🙂

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s