2 thoughts on “Pink Blush”

1. Meghan Jones says:

   November 23, 2014 at 2:22 -07:0011

   Very nice images, Mary. I really like how you have written the second line so that it both comments on the mountains but also links “horizon pink” with “blush of innocence”. Haiku structure often sets up 2 lines as linked with the 3rd line (or first line) as separate. Stephen Addiss is much more lucid on this point. However, other haiku are written in such a way as I think you have done here. Nicely done!

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2. mincs1 says:

   November 23, 2014 at 2:22 -07:0011

   Thanks, Meghan. I think I am going to like what I learn from Stephen Addiss 🙂

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