November 17, 2014 by mincs1 Pink Blush White morning mountains chaste above horizon pink blush of innocence Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
Very nice images, Mary. I really like how you have written the second line so that it both comments on the mountains but also links “horizon pink” with “blush of innocence”. Haiku structure often sets up 2 lines as linked with the 3rd line (or first line) as separate. Stephen Addiss is much more lucid on this point. However, other haiku are written in such a way as I think you have done here. Nicely done!
Thanks, Meghan. I think I am going to like what I learn from Stephen Addiss 🙂