2 thoughts on “Soaring”

1. Meghan says:

   November 15, 2014 at 2:22 -07:0011

   I like this haiku perhaps because I just saw a graceful bald eagle on the wing a few days ago. What do you think of this version (and notice the missing comma)?

   graceful eagle soars
   silent overhead prayer
   wings point to Heaven

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2. mincs1 says:

   November 15, 2014 at 2:22 -07:0011

   It’s wonderful how just changing one word can make a big difference. I like it Meghan!

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