2 thoughts on “Soaring

  1. Meghan says:

    I like this haiku perhaps because I just saw a graceful bald eagle on the wing a few days ago. What do you think of this version (and notice the missing comma)?

    graceful eagle soars
    silent overhead prayer
    wings point to Heaven

  2. mincs1 says:

    It’s wonderful how just changing one word can make a big difference. I like it Meghan!

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