Delicate cherry
blossoms spring’s pink fusion buds
flowering friendships
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Delicate cherry
blossoms spring’s pink fusion buds
flowering friendships
ScribbleDartsfromtheHeart 
🙂 And I reply,
Flowering friendships
Delicate cherry blossoms
Mountains add much strength
You were inspired, Mary! I’m glad 🙂
I have to admit I am not quite satisfied with my reply Haiku. Perhaps this is better?:
Flowering friendships
Delicate cherry blossoms
Strong mountain backdrop
These haiku have a way of drawing one in, don’t they?! I like the image of the mountains adding strength in your first version, Meghan. In the second version I see them as standing passively and the piece doesn’t have the same impact for me.
Thank you, Mary for your comments. I had not thought of the second version of the mountains as being passive. Good observation! I really was trying to say that the mountains add strength to the beauty of the blossoms and flowering friendships.
Thanks for writing your haiku; I really appreciated what you said. 🙂
Yes, haiku can draw one in a very compelling way!