3 thoughts on “Applesauce”

1. Meghan says:

   November 7, 2014 at 2:22 p11

   A good haiku, Mary. And well named! Have fun in your haiku by omitting the comma between ground and unrecognizable. Do you see how it can change the haiku?

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2. mincs1 says:

   November 8, 2014 at 2:22 p11

   Brilliant, Meghan! I do see the difference removing the comma makes. Thank-you 🙂

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   • Meghan says:

     November 9, 2014 at 2:22 p11

     You are very welcome. Amazing what such a small, nay a tiny, change can bring to the haiku.

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