November 4, 2014 by mincs1 Applesauce Ripe apples smash on ground unrecognizable split second fury Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
A good haiku, Mary. And well named! Have fun in your haiku by omitting the comma between ground and unrecognizable. Do you see how it can change the haiku?
Brilliant, Meghan! I do see the difference removing the comma makes. Thank-you 🙂
You are very welcome. Amazing what such a small, nay a tiny, change can bring to the haiku.