October 25, 2014 by mincs1 Clouds Silence and stillness reach for hearts, cloud messengers float across steel sky Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
A nice little haiku, Mary. Very good repetition of the “s” sound and the unexpectedness of cloud messengers moving across a steel sky. The “softness” of clouds against a steel sky is effective.
Thanks, Meghan. I had fun with the “s” sounds 🙂