2 thoughts on “Clouds”

1. Meghan Jones says:

   October 25, 2014 at 2:22 -06:0010

   A nice little haiku, Mary. Very good repetition of the “s” sound and the unexpectedness of cloud messengers moving across a steel sky. The “softness” of clouds against a steel sky is effective.

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   • mincs1 says:

     October 26, 2014 at 2:22 -06:0010

     Thanks, Meghan. I had fun with the “s” sounds 🙂

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