(image credit: Norman Rockwell)
Have you ever felt like you are someone else
looking in
looking out
You hear chatter and see smiles
volume up
volume down
You see motion
stepping fast
stepping slow
But what do you see
as time and distance strain
and fade away
What do you hear
as blasts turn to whispers
and fade away
What do you feel
as shaking turns to quivers
and fade away
someone in the mirror
fading away
Wow!! Yes, I have felt this way, Mary. I love your poem’s construction and it’s lyrical “chorus” of “…and fade away.” Makes your poem strong, powerful and haunting, too. Again, wow!!
Thank-you!